sansan writer

Sorry for the delayed reply. Anyway, thanks for reading it and also for giving your opinions. :) Godbless!

nice one.. this line im kinda relate to it 'And make you forget that somebody' keep it up.

thank you!

Hi there! Quite a nice poem! I enjoyed it. The biggest thing that bothered me: The abuse of the ellipsis (the ...) I don't really mind it in poetry but ...

This is a really good poem, I like it. then again I like alot of things...hehe :P starred it...:) Keep up the good work..=) thank you so much. have a ...

i'm quite affected on your piece. me and my ex had just separated, and i'm hoping someday we could be back together..

gosh, it caught my attention dear.. its so intriguing.. have a nice day!

it's good... is this your advocacy?? to save animals' lives?? hope through this people might be aware that even animals have right to live. god bless!